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by cf221188 over 7 months ago.
thanks for the comment! I played around with the placement quite abit and i can see what you are saying. I might try moving things around.

by Ryu over 7 months ago.
yes.. v nice.. but the golfer on the right does look like he’s going to fall off the end of the type.. just budge it left a bit and you got yourself a winner! : )


Clever, thought of going this direction earlier but just couldn’t think of something as clever as this. Nice job! Though I am not completely sold on the font or the placement of the copy.