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by Andy over 1 years ago.
Bang on with this!! I like the simplicity, the only thing i would suggest, would be to lose the reflection of the text.
by Nikkib over 1 years ago.
thanks for your comments guys, I know this needs some refining, but its good to know the right message is coming across.
by 123 over 1 years ago.
I think this entry has a potential, I like the house keyhole that doubles up silhouette but the text and reflection seems a little off. I like the ‘something different’ with the V2 version text with the rounded type and two colours to distinguish the words. I’d be interested to see if you have any ideas/options incorporating the graphic element into the text somehow too (i.e. as the A maybe, or the text partially overlaying it or anything you think looks better than my suggestion) just to see how it fits together to try and put something of a relationship between the text and graphic element?
m.att.o – many thanks for your helpful comments and constructive crit. I’m currently working on evolving and polishing this design, so look out for some more submissions.
Very cool… it’s a lock to a home AND a person secure within their home… clever